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Braeden Schulze's avatar

This was a great read! The narrative of warriors about to make a final stands against creatures of the dark provides both thrill and tension, and reminds me of the final journal entry of Balin in Moria. Moreover, the concept of comatose individuals forced to fight a losing war on another plane of existence flips the age old dream warrior fantasy on its head, as what should be a means of escapism from the mundane is turned nightmarish by overwhelming odds and deathly stakes. Excellent work!

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Justin Deming's avatar

Oh man, this is excellent, Dan. I love stories about the forces of good and evil squaring off. Yours is so well captured and so suspenseful!

Also, I saw what you meant regarding our stories, ha!

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