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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

That was macabre indeed! And, as Jim said, I couldn’t stop reading it. Excellent job, Dan! (I’m embarrassed not to have known the word silage, despite growing up partially on a farm. 😂) The part about the dream of not being able to breach the surface due to a transparent obstruction reminded of the 1978 film, “The Legacy”. Did you ever see that? I was a little kid and it traumatized me. There’s a scene where an excellent swimmer gets trapped beneath a glass obstruction that suddenly closes over an olympic pool.

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Caro Henry's avatar

Wow! So good! My recurring nightmare from childhood is riding on a packed bus, going through a tunnel that’s suddenly on fire. Some nights, we make it out of the tunnel; other nights, we don't make it out before I awake. It's been a year or more since I've had that nightmare.

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