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Garen Glazier's avatar

Wow this was an edge of my seat read. Hard to root for Jeb, but he seems to have gotten what was coming to him in the end.

I chuckled a little to myself reading your end note because I was wondering while reading your story if it was inspired by your new digs!

Nathan Slake's avatar

Great, propulsive read, Dan!

Best line: "Holding out his key card like a tiny plastic rectangular Excalibur." Superb!

I'm out of the loop. New move? New digs? Hope all is great. What's the strange goings on you mention??

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