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Nathan Slake's avatar

Always amazes me how you can capture so much in so few words.

I read this twice over. "Fire kindled, smoke rose"... it's evocative and emotional for what has happened and the ritual of sending off the dead.

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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Epic ending. Make every word count, excellent!

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