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Short and— Well, not sweet. Definitely my kind of creepy cut. Nice one, Daniel!

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Thanks very much Ken 🙏

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Nov 5Liked by Daniel O’Donnell

nice ending. also love 'Bruised clouds loom'

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Thanks very much 🙏

I liked that line too 👍🏼😁

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Nice, brooding prose poem!

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Thanks very much Daniel 🙏

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Nov 6Liked by Daniel O’Donnell

Slick, Dan. Love the short sentences.

Bruised clouds loom!!

Incredible.

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Thanks very much Nathan 🙏

Yeah, must have had a premonition of approaching darkness 🙄

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Nice one. Influenced by the recent Salams Lot essay you did?

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Thanks very much Jason 🙏 Yeah, absolutely 😁

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