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Nathan Slake's avatar

Somehow missed this in my inbox before, Dan. But I saw it just now and have read it and enjoyed it very much. There be power in the words by Grimbauld, and it's a moving moment at the end. A really moving moment, especially with the pacing of the lines.

“I learned from someone a long time ago that you need strength to win a war, but courage to keep the peace. This is the courage I ask from you now. Let me stop the suffering.” <--love this!

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks very much, Nathan 🙏

That’s so kind of you and I’m really glad you liked it 🙂

I guess I’m just trying to build a fully rounded character who is a great warrior but has no love of war. Next time things should be a bit lighter though. He’s still getting involved in all kinds of scrapes but at least he might get some romance in his life as well 😁

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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

A bit of Shylock (Merchant of Venice) coming through here in this bit, at least I was reminded of it. "Do they not bleed like we do?"

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Alexander. I’ll take that as you comparing me to Shakespeare so that’ll do 😁

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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Exactly that. :) Hope you're having a great Sunday!

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Over in Sicily at the moment so having a great weekend 👍🏼

Hope you’re having a good one too, Alexander 🙂

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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Awesome! Enjoy the vacay! Hope to watch some Shogun later. Tinkering with WED post atm.

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Alexander 😃

Good luck with your post. Looking forward to it 👍🏼

I wrote the first part of the next Grimbauld story this morning at 5am waiting for everyone else to wake up 😴🙄😁

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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Ah, the quiet time. Excellent going! I am still in the research phase. Pen to paper later. Thanks!

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D.W. Davison's avatar

“flapping, clucking wastrels…” 😂

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Glad you liked that line, Daniel 😁

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