Always good to write with the senses. I'm sure you don't need luck but I cheer you on, Dan! Go, go, sight, taste, touch, smell and sound out the other four!
Oh wow, Daniel, loved this story! And your idea for writing additional stories sounds like such fun! I wish you luck with the remaining stories. Thank you as always for mentioning me.
Daniel, you really moved me. Of course you can't know why, you don't know me, but you have given me an answer that I have been in search of myself. Thank you.
I really appreciate your kind feedback. I’ve seen some quite dismissive takes on micro fiction, saying it’s not proper story telling, which I obviously completely disagree with. It’s tough trying to tell a story which such limitations, but that’s also what I think makes them so worthwhile, because you have to work hard to create a world in 50 words. You should definitely give it a go! 👍🏼
I’ve got another 3 coming this week, starting with tonight, so hope you enjoy them too 🙂
Always good to write with the senses. I'm sure you don't need luck but I cheer you on, Dan! Go, go, sight, taste, touch, smell and sound out the other four!
Thanks very much Alexander 🙏
I’ll give it my best shot 😁
Ah, yes, the smell in a loved ones hair. Something I know well.
This reads like the last scene of an epic novel. Perfect last line.
Thanks very much K.C. 🙏
Oh wow, Daniel, loved this story! And your idea for writing additional stories sounds like such fun! I wish you luck with the remaining stories. Thank you as always for mentioning me.
Thanks very much Justin 🙏
Yeah, one story just didn’t seem enough for such a great prompt 🙂👍🏼
You have a knack for tugging my heart string and with few choice images too. Great job Daniel!
Thanks very much Ika 🙏
What a lovely image to go with the charming, moving story. As always, I'm so impressed how you pack so much into so few words.
Go go go with the others!
Thanks very much, Nathan 🙏
Pretty much got another 2 of them written today so I’m getting there! 😁
Nicely done!
A very moving piece in only 50 words. I love this, Dan!
Thanks very much, Caro 🙏
I’m so glad you liked it as it’s one of the very few stories that I got emotional about whilst writing, and I’m not entirely sure why 🤔
However, I’m glad I was able to pass that on through the story. As always your kind words are much appreciated 🙂
Really like this. Short and sweet. A story after Hemingway's own heart.
Thanks very much David 🙏
Daniel, you really moved me. Of course you can't know why, you don't know me, but you have given me an answer that I have been in search of myself. Thank you.
Thank you very much, Michael for such a lovely message 👍🏼
I’m so glad you had that emotional connection to the story. I can ask for nothing more 🙏
Wow 👏 👏👏🙌
Thanks very much Jason 🙏
Very moving. I love a good microfiction.
Thanks very much Hanna 🙏
I’m so glad you liked it 🙂
Thanks very much, Nadia. I’m so glad you liked the story 🙏
That show has been recommended to me by so many people and I’ve never got around to watching it. I’ll need to make an extra effort now 👍🏼🙂
Thanks very much Bethel 🙏
I really appreciate your kind feedback. I’ve seen some quite dismissive takes on micro fiction, saying it’s not proper story telling, which I obviously completely disagree with. It’s tough trying to tell a story which such limitations, but that’s also what I think makes them so worthwhile, because you have to work hard to create a world in 50 words. You should definitely give it a go! 👍🏼
I’ve got another 3 coming this week, starting with tonight, so hope you enjoy them too 🙂