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Bill Hiatt's avatar

Nice punch at the end!

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Nathan Slake's avatar

"I came to, lying in bed, with my face covered in blood, and having no idea what had happened." You can't leave us with this without saying what happened, Dan!!

"But, as I wake covered in blood, in a house that stinks of death..." Excellent line. First the blood, then a house that stinks of death, and then tied back to the opening line. Excellent.

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