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Nice punch at the end!

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Thanks very much Bill 🙏

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Sep 25Liked by Daniel O’Donnell

"I came to, lying in bed, with my face covered in blood, and having no idea what had happened." You can't leave us with this without saying what happened, Dan!!

"But, as I wake covered in blood, in a house that stinks of death..." Excellent line. First the blood, then a house that stinks of death, and then tied back to the opening line. Excellent.

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Thanks very much Nathan 🙏

Well, that would be telling 😁

I guess what I can say is I didn’t end up

In jail, so it couldn’t have been that bad, but everything else is still a possibility 😆

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Sep 25Liked by Daniel O’Donnell

Hahaha, amazing. Look forward to hearing about it!

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I love these horror micros. Super fun and always leaving me craving more!

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Thanks very much Sean 🙏

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Sep 23Liked by Daniel O’Donnell

For heaven's sake, Daniel! That is masterful writing, if you ask me. Just excellent! Creepy and open ended.... Now, about that other story....?

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Thanks very much Sharron. I really appreciate the kind words 🙏

Ah well, as the other story would be fact and not fiction it might take me a wee bit longer to get around to telling that one. I’m sure I’ll get there eventually 😁

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Sep 23Liked by Daniel O’Donnell

Great work!

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Thanks very much 🙏

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