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Evocative! 100 choice words, my friend! Have a great holiday!

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Thanks Alexander

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So good, Dan! "cowardly sighs of sleep will become lullabies of screams." Love this line.

You have a real skill for cramming so much into 100 words, along with a twist.

Great to have the lore behind this, too.

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Thanks very much Nathan. I always appreciate your feedback 👍🏼🙂

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Whoa. I wasn't expecting that. A very nice piece and great twist. Thank you.

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Thanks Ben. Glad you liked it 🙂

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Okay, so I’m a little twisted. I not only found this spooky but funny. That evil spirit didn’t expect a dog to protect its territory. 😐

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Thanks Caro. Exactly right! It had all these evil plans only to have the tables turned and end up being the terrified one!

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Damn spooky!

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Thanks Jim 😁

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