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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Evocative! 100 choice words, my friend! Have a great holiday!

Nathan Slake's avatar

So good, Dan! "cowardly sighs of sleep will become lullabies of screams." Love this line.

You have a real skill for cramming so much into 100 words, along with a twist.

Great to have the lore behind this, too.

Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks very much Nathan. I always appreciate your feedback 👍🏼🙂

Caro Henry's avatar

Okay, so I’m a little twisted. I not only found this spooky but funny. That evil spirit didn’t expect a dog to protect its territory. 😐

Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Caro. Exactly right! It had all these evil plans only to have the tables turned and end up being the terrified one!

Jim Melvin's avatar

Damn spooky!

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Ben. Glad you liked it 🙂