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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Evocative! 100 choice words, my friend! Have a great holiday!

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Alexander

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Nathan Slake's avatar

So good, Dan! "cowardly sighs of sleep will become lullabies of screams." Love this line.

You have a real skill for cramming so much into 100 words, along with a twist.

Great to have the lore behind this, too.

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks very much Nathan. I always appreciate your feedback 👍🏼🙂

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Caro Henry's avatar

Okay, so I’m a little twisted. I not only found this spooky but funny. That evil spirit didn’t expect a dog to protect its territory. 😐

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Caro. Exactly right! It had all these evil plans only to have the tables turned and end up being the terrified one!

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Jim Melvin's avatar

Damn spooky!

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Jim 😁

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Thanks Ben. Glad you liked it 🙂

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