What a treat to wake up to this new instalment, Dan! Go Josh for nudging you towards writing this.
Great opening and momentum and excellent to hear you have a plan. I'm very intrigued about all of this and what La Torre has already been up to and what will happen next. I particularly love the opening lines setting the scene of the location and season.
Chapping -- that's not a word I knew. Had to Google it. But now I know :)
This was one that fell together quite easily. My son goes to school in Ayr and I always drive past these giant houses and think who owns them and what shady stuff do they get up to?😁
The story will hopefully take a few interesting turns and through that we’ll learn a bit more about La Torre and his past
That’s so funny about “chapping” 😆
Like I said, I just write in my own voice and terminology and don’t think to check if it would make sense elsewhere. We used to play a game called chap door, run when we were kids which always got us in a whole lot of trouble 😳😁
What a treat to wake up to this new instalment, Dan! Go Josh for nudging you towards writing this.
Great opening and momentum and excellent to hear you have a plan. I'm very intrigued about all of this and what La Torre has already been up to and what will happen next. I particularly love the opening lines setting the scene of the location and season.
Chapping -- that's not a word I knew. Had to Google it. But now I know :)
Thanks very much, Nathan 🙏
This was one that fell together quite easily. My son goes to school in Ayr and I always drive past these giant houses and think who owns them and what shady stuff do they get up to?😁
The story will hopefully take a few interesting turns and through that we’ll learn a bit more about La Torre and his past
That’s so funny about “chapping” 😆
Like I said, I just write in my own voice and terminology and don’t think to check if it would make sense elsewhere. We used to play a game called chap door, run when we were kids which always got us in a whole lot of trouble 😳😁
Never stop writing in your own voice and terminology 🙌🤩
I love it.
Missed this first time round so glad I caught up with it today. Thanks for sharing it again. Looking forward to part 2.
Thanks very much Jason. Glad you enjoyed it 🙏